Thursday, 13 August 2015

My recount introduction

Hello.Today I share with you, about: THE BLIND FOLD WALK. We planned using a hamburger planner. I learnt to write a good introduction. I wrote an introduction that was interesting by thinking really carefully about keeping the reader entertained. Here is my introduction: A week ago on a Monday morning, the day when everyone is tired, Miss Harris made us a bit less bored by saying something evil. "We are going on a blind fold walk," she said. We gasped, looking at her like 'Are you serious?' I just still remember not believing her. I wished I could go back to bed when we were told we should take our shoes and socks off." My next steps is to: Try to put a bit more descriptive language in my introduction.

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