Friday, 28 August 2015

The Gap-Finishing My Book.

The Gap.

By Marie Gibson.

It is the last week for our novel.

Here is my finishing touches for novel studies!

I learnt to write a blurb for my novel here it is:

Join Matthew and Rosie as the earth quake happens, and they end up with a disaster with Prospectors Gap

My next step is to make my cover design more bigger with more illustration.
I hope like my design!

Thursday, 13 August 2015

My recount introduction

Hello.Today I share with you, about: THE BLIND FOLD WALK. We planned using a hamburger planner. I learnt to write a good introduction. I wrote an introduction that was interesting by thinking really carefully about keeping the reader entertained. Here is my introduction: A week ago on a Monday morning, the day when everyone is tired, Miss Harris made us a bit less bored by saying something evil. "We are going on a blind fold walk," she said. We gasped, looking at her like 'Are you serious?' I just still remember not believing her. I wished I could go back to bed when we were told we should take our shoes and socks off." My next steps is to: Try to put a bit more descriptive language in my introduction.

Monday, 3 August 2015

Communication Skills 😊

“Have no friends not equal to yourself”

All people should have the same rights. Otherwise its unfair, everyone deserves to give things AT LEAST a TRY at doing things. If that does not happen, that is UNEQUAL.