Thursday, 13 August 2015
My recount introduction
Hello.Today I share with you, about: THE BLIND FOLD WALK.
We planned using a hamburger planner.
I learnt to write a good introduction. I wrote an introduction that was interesting by thinking really carefully about keeping the reader entertained.
Here is my introduction:
A week ago on a Monday morning, the day when everyone is tired, Miss Harris made us a bit less bored by saying something evil. "We are going on a blind fold walk," she said. We gasped, looking at her like 'Are you serious?' I just still remember not believing her. I wished I could go back to bed when we were told we should take our shoes and socks off."
My next steps is to: Try to put a bit more descriptive language in my introduction.
Labels:
introduction,
recount,
writing
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